domingo, 18 de abril de 2010
EEEEEEEARTHQUAKE!
Well, that day i was in La Serena, and there was weaker than here (stgo), but that doesn't mean that i don't feel the earthquake, in la serena was strong (but i can't imagine how was here). I was without my family, i was in my (ex) GF's house (i don't know why i went [actually, i know but doesn't matter ]), the problem was that i thought immediatly in UFO or some weird thing, and for a little moment i thought that the world was falling in pieces hahahahaha. After there wasn't electricity so i don't knew nothing about my family (and fortunately i bought the ticket to the bus on friday's evening so i wasn't problems to comeback) and i was waiting till the morning, and finally i could talk with my family and they told me that everything was ok here =)!. The sunday's morning i comeback without a problem in the road. END!
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Good job.
ResponderEliminarHave a classmate proofread it for suggestions.
2 points.
Paula
Hi Felipe,i only wont say`s that in the second file youre use "don´t" when the correct word is "didn´t" Because the time of the sentence is in past and "don´t" is in present.
ResponderEliminarIn the rest of your article y don´t see nothing wrong.
goodbye.